Persuasion- formative feedback

Since I’ve been designing for the Persuasion campaign then summitting my draft outcomes,I’ve been waiting for some feedback that could help me improve as a designer but also my outcomes for the client as I feel that I need to make a strong design and impression on the clients.

After handing in my R&D file plus the campaign outcomes I had made, I was given some formative feedback from my tutor Wendy, in this feedback it was very useful points to help me improve as a designer but mainly my final outcomes for the client to be the best for the audience to use

Below is my feedback that was given to help.

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On the top is my first set of feedback this was very positive feedback and helped me understand areas that have to be improved on, I found having feedback is important as other designer can see error that you can’t always see when reading the feedback I sent an email to Wendy asking for some more guidance  to help me see the main elements of my campaign that should be changed as the email was very wide but was also useful to see some points of errors that could be seen, i wanted to be very sepafic about my camapgin as i really. wanted to improve the outcoems for the best.

Above is the final support i asked for, Once I got in touch with Wendy and she gave me some more support that has helped me improve the whole campaign for the client and the University project.The main areas i went on to change was my laytouts of thew magnets and the roler banner and definitely the the final placement of the leafelrt that you can see by my newesrt blog posts.

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