Since the last blog post about my improved design sketches and concept, I had sent my work off to the client to show off my outcomes ideas before making them but while i have been waiting over the weekend for the feedback I had made a start on the outcomes and will change them if needs be.
when I got the email back from the client I was a bit worried to open it as this was my first major product on my own with a client expect from friends, The feedback I had got from the client was very postive and he was very professional and kind about the work there was a couple of points that i felt I could use and develop more on my outcomes.
Roller banner poster feedback
The feedback I got from the client for the roller banner was very strong, they thought that the roller banner was a strong ideas as it would stand out in the waiting room as they have room and they said it would work well with the audience more as they eye issues meaning they would get to see it without having to stand a wall trying to see it. One of the improvements to take on was about adding a website or a book for the audience to read to gain some more information on the topic .
magnets feedback
The feedback I had from the midget was very positive as the magnet got the awareness of foot health at home on a everyday and had contact detail if they ever need them there was a comment that was made about the outcome that was about ” would people want to see feet on their fridge everyday ” to repose to it I felt that the magent imagery wasn’t that bad as it went real feet but having imagery on it help the message across so it’s up the audience if they want use the item or not.
leaflet and notebook feedback
with the feedback for the notebook and leaflet I had a mixture of points of feedback on them for example I had good points about the layout of the leaflet but question on the notebook and what the usage being but I feel the note book will just something the audience can use whenever they want and it remind them feet – check feet. The leaflet had nice points about how the design isn’t too powerful over the text and I had things that I should include to improve the leaflet more ;
- education points
- red flags
- warning issues about feet
- contact if someone needs more help
Overall feedback
the overall feedback I had on the work was very positive there was no major sign of dislike to any of the outcomes the feedback also allowed me to gain more ways to develop the outcomes for example adding in section to the leaflet to make it the strongest way, the client did I like the colour theme and how it was a bit different from normal one colour design, he also liked the designs across the campaign flowed throughout there was no main jump in designs .
The next stage is designs theses outcome and take on board the feedback to make them the best outcomes that can be used in the foot centre.
Georgia Smith 