Yesterday I went to ask for some feedback on my editorial design work so fair before handing into my deadline next Monday, as I’m nearly done I thought it was a good time to ask for some feedback on the overall draft I’ve got right now.
Normally I’m very anxious about people seeing my work and giving their opinions and giving feedback to improve but yesterday I felt that the 10 minute talk with Owein helped me a lot clear my head and also see what I can do to improve my work.
The feedback I got was very good Owein liked my work and felt that the images were strong and showed my theme well for the article, there was just small things I could try and change about my article and that was :
- only use 2 typefaces and make 3 sizes maximum
- maybe use the error of para gaps as a thing you want ( show gaps in her memory )
- only use one type of paint mark and lighten it .
This feedback was all very helpful as it has given me more of an idea of way to play around with the typography within my article.
Georgia Smith 