presentation feedback- manifesto

This morning, me and Laura stood up in front of 70 max students that were from graphics and illustrations to give our manifesto / protest idea and final outcomes of what we have done over the week.

The presentation It was a bit scary too do but doing presentations regularly has helped me over come my fears of public speaking and I don’t get nervous speaking with loads of people watching, today I felt that I was able to speak clearly for 5 minutes even though I was shaking a bit with nervous.

In the presentation we had 5slides on information  that me and Laura both spoke about .

page one –  one side of name of protest  ( I spoke about what our protest was about)

page two – research on our. chosen protest of companies taking too much profit on items. – Laura

page 3 – mood boards and research developments to help make drafts – Me

Page 4 – final outcomes – me and Laura both spoke.

Page 5 – sources slide.

After presenting to the class and the two tutors of Jo and Theo, me and Laura had some feedback on our overall work, the tutor both believed our name our protest called People over Profit was very easy and simple to understand what we want to the protest to be about, the research and protest making was all very strong but our poster wasn’t that strong as our protest. We need to go away and work on our work, of making text readable and making something a bit more bold.

Me and Laura both agree with Theo with improving our poster should be done, we have both agree to go home and to play around with the poster find a better text that readable and a layout, however we are happy with how our protest is going and today presentation.

The development of the poster will be in my blog post of the developing poster posts with all the developments of me designing the poster plus Laura input.

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